Comments on: Unworthy http://www.readitlive.com/2009/04/21/unworthy/ dedicated to promoting budding poets, writers and bloggers Thu, 02 Feb 2012 20:10:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Usman http://www.readitlive.com/2009/04/21/unworthy/comment-page-1/#comment-6246 Usman Mon, 11 May 2009 21:35:08 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/?p=518#comment-6246 Sana, This is rough. Choppy, with multiple grammatical errors (unless I'm so rusted my judgment is imapired). However, once you clean this up, there are jewels here in my humble opinion (which is useless these days). Some good imageries and some good stuff. Keep writing. Sana,

This is rough. Choppy, with multiple grammatical errors (unless I’m so rusted my judgment is imapired). However, once you clean this up, there are jewels here in my humble opinion (which is useless these days). Some good imageries and some good stuff.

Keep writing.

]]> By: Noor http://www.readitlive.com/2009/04/21/unworthy/comment-page-1/#comment-6232 Noor Thu, 30 Apr 2009 05:18:18 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/?p=518#comment-6232 Sana, I know I promised to get to this today, but it doesn't look like I am going to be able to give a detailed critique. I am so, so sorry. I will get to this ASAP. Sana, I know I promised to get to this today, but it doesn’t look like I am going to be able to give a detailed critique. I am so, so sorry. I will get to this ASAP.

]]> By: Cavaliere http://www.readitlive.com/2009/04/21/unworthy/comment-page-1/#comment-6230 Cavaliere Wed, 29 Apr 2009 09:21:02 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/?p=518#comment-6230 I think it's good ! I think it’s good !

]]> By: Sana http://www.readitlive.com/2009/04/21/unworthy/comment-page-1/#comment-6228 Sana Sat, 25 Apr 2009 19:48:51 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/?p=518#comment-6228 very bad ppl! :( very bad ppl! :(

]]> By: Sana http://www.readitlive.com/2009/04/21/unworthy/comment-page-1/#comment-6218 Sana Tue, 21 Apr 2009 05:51:03 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/?p=518#comment-6218 this was initially supposed to be an attempt at a sonnet but then i got bored, heh, so now it\'s just a regular poem with an influence of the sonnet on its form i guess... this was initially supposed to be an attempt at a sonnet but then i got bored, heh, so now it\’s just a regular poem with an influence of the sonnet on its form i guess…

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