Comments on: After http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/ dedicated to promoting budding poets, writers and bloggers Thu, 02 Feb 2012 20:10:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Noor-ul-ain Noor http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/comment-page-1/#comment-3788 Noor-ul-ain Noor Fri, 11 Jul 2008 23:44:34 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/#comment-3788 Fierce and breathless. The imagery is astounding in its anger and power. I couldn't find any issues at all. Fierce and breathless. The imagery is astounding in its anger and power. I couldn’t find any issues at all.

]]> By: hera http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/comment-page-1/#comment-3778 hera Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:08:07 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/#comment-3778 haha. thanks sidra .man this site has got me all up an working. i am addicted to reading here and writing, of course. i just wrote this today in sheer anger with a crazy hand at the keyboard hehe and so thats why i couldnt workshop it lol. haha. thanks sidra .man this site has got me all up an working. i am addicted to reading here and writing, of course. i just wrote this today in sheer anger with a crazy hand at the keyboard hehe and so thats why i couldnt workshop it lol.

]]> By: Sidra Nadeem http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/comment-page-1/#comment-3775 Sidra Nadeem Fri, 11 Jul 2008 19:03:19 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/#comment-3775 Fraz is right, this is raw and power packed. The sheer power and anger of the first three lines "if I could size you up/piece you into dip and stake/I will cudgel your double-fisted heart into pieces" really shocked me. Its really refreshing to have something so direct and angry to read and worded so nicely ofcourse. I'm always worried about wording an emotion appropriately and I guess that sometimes makes it lose its power. Why don't u ever have these workshopped in class? You have SUCH a poet in you!!! Fraz is right, this is raw and power packed. The sheer power and anger of the first three lines “if I could size you up/piece you into dip and stake/I will cudgel your double-fisted heart into pieces” really shocked me.
Its really refreshing to have something so direct and angry to read and worded so nicely ofcourse. I’m always worried about wording an emotion appropriately and I guess that sometimes makes it lose its power. Why don’t u ever have these workshopped in class? You have SUCH a poet in you!!!

]]> By: Hera Naguib http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/comment-page-1/#comment-3774 Hera Naguib Fri, 11 Jul 2008 18:42:12 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/#comment-3774 Haha. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. :) Haha. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. :)

]]> By: Fraz Nayyar http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/comment-page-1/#comment-3773 Fraz Nayyar Fri, 11 Jul 2008 18:17:14 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2008/07/11/after/#comment-3773 Wow! A raw and power-packed, profoundly moving punch! Loved it! The Precipice of Farewell Dreams for After. RIL has picked up in a big way. Wow! A raw and power-packed, profoundly moving punch! Loved it!

The Precipice of Farewell Dreams for After. RIL has picked up in a big way.

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