http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/ dedicated to promoting budding poets, writers and bloggers Thu, 02 Feb 2012 20:10:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/comment-page-1/#comment-1360 Sidra Nadeem Wed, 08 Aug 2007 06:27:20 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/#comment-1360 Your obsession with death is creepy. Most of your work I've read is errr...deadly. The poem has a very loftly feel to it probably because of the repetition. The narrator sounds like someone more than human. Good going! Your obsession with death is creepy. Most of your work I’ve read is errr…deadly. The poem has a very loftly feel to it probably because of the repetition. The narrator sounds like someone more than human. Good going!

]]> http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/comment-page-1/#comment-1350 Hasnain Akram Tue, 07 Aug 2007 08:13:26 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/#comment-1350 Awesome going man...beautiful. No negative critique I can think of. Awesome going man…beautiful. No negative critique I can think of.

]]> http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/comment-page-1/#comment-1348 Noor-ul-Ain Tue, 07 Aug 2007 06:03:09 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/#comment-1348 oh btw... in my fav. stanza, it should be "the haze and craze HAVE died down" instead of has. oh btw… in my fav. stanza, it should be “the haze and craze HAVE died down” instead of has.

]]> http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/comment-page-1/#comment-1346 Noor-ul-Ain Tue, 07 Aug 2007 03:28:56 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2007/08/07/the-dirge-of-death/#comment-1346 The words are woven as if by an enchanted thread. I love the effortless flow of the words, one stanza marrying the other, and the laughter that stands tall at the end, stands tall and proud and mighty in the face of the ultimate defeat: death. I love the stanza that begins "the smoke has swirled..." You should write more poetry. This poems makes me want to sing it, and you should know that I have a horrible singing voice. : ) The words are woven as if by an enchanted thread. I love the effortless flow of the words, one stanza marrying the other, and the laughter that stands tall at the end, stands tall and proud and mighty in the face of the ultimate defeat: death. I love the stanza that begins “the smoke has swirled…” You should write more poetry. This poems makes me want to sing it, and you should know that I have a horrible singing voice. : )

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