Comments on: Last Night… http://www.readitlive.com/2007/05/29/last-night/ dedicated to promoting budding poets, writers and bloggers Thu, 02 Feb 2012 20:10:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Qurat http://www.readitlive.com/2007/05/29/last-night/comment-page-1/#comment-517 Qurat Thu, 31 May 2007 18:59:06 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2007/05/29/last-night/#comment-517 It's simply beautiful. For a change you've written a simple poem, the way I like. :P It's very different from your usual style. Some great images in here, very vivid. 'You lost your way, you lost me too. I looked for you in every ally Every face, every voice, Every stop, every start. And then I looked for you inside my heart.' Lovely, good job! It’s simply beautiful. For a change you’ve written a simple poem, the way I like. :P It’s very different from your usual style. Some great images in here, very vivid.

‘You lost your way, you lost me too.
I looked for you in every ally
Every face, every voice,
Every stop, every start.
And then I looked for you inside my heart.’

Lovely, good job!

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]]> By: Sidra Nadeem http://www.readitlive.com/2007/05/29/last-night/comment-page-1/#comment-500 Sidra Nadeem Wed, 30 May 2007 03:46:30 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2007/05/29/last-night/#comment-500 Thankyou Noor =) I agree, this is very unlike my style but I guess I read too much of your work =P thus the centre align, short sentences style. You're inspiring. Thankyou Noor =) I agree, this is very unlike my style but I guess I read too much of your work =P thus the centre align, short sentences style. You’re inspiring.

]]> By: Noor-ul-Ain http://www.readitlive.com/2007/05/29/last-night/comment-page-1/#comment-497 Noor-ul-Ain Tue, 29 May 2007 21:01:20 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/2007/05/29/last-night/#comment-497 Wow. This is very unlike your usual style. It is quite dark...honestly something I can see myself writing. : ) The images are very strong: hen's eggs, snake, poison, black blood. All of this is truly very fascinating. Wow. This is very unlike your usual style. It is quite dark…honestly something I can see myself writing. : ) The images are very strong: hen’s eggs, snake, poison, black blood. All of this is truly very fascinating.

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