Comments on: A Tribute to Suitors Part One http://www.readitlive.com/2007/02/07/a-tribute-to-suitors-part-one/ dedicated to promoting budding poets, writers and bloggers Thu, 02 Feb 2012 20:10:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Abidoon Nadeem http://www.readitlive.com/2007/02/07/a-tribute-to-suitors-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-155 Abidoon Nadeem Mon, 09 Apr 2007 07:04:07 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/?p=29#comment-155 Finally, I got a comment. Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it. I was working on part 2. It is done half way but unfortunately I lost the inspiration. As soon as it comes back I will work on it again :). Finally, I got a comment. Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it.

I was working on part 2. It is done half way but unfortunately I lost the inspiration. As soon as it comes back I will work on it again :) .

]]> By: Usman http://www.readitlive.com/2007/02/07/a-tribute-to-suitors-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-150 Usman Sun, 08 Apr 2007 21:40:44 +0000 http://www.readitlive.com/?p=29#comment-150 I like the story embedded within and I love some of the archaic words and phrases used. However I did think some of it might have been a tad pale? It reads precisely like a tale of yorewhich is fine usually, but here seems a lil out of place... especially because you end it abruptly? Some grammar issues need dealing with, but good show overall. If you don't mind, I'll rate it? 7/10 I like the story embedded within and I love some of the archaic words and phrases used. However I did think some of it might have been a tad pale?

It reads precisely like a tale of yorewhich is fine usually, but here seems a lil out of place… especially because you end it abruptly?

Some grammar issues need dealing with, but good show overall.

If you don’t mind, I’ll rate it?

7/10

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